Wednesday 14 April 2021

12 things in Mrs S’s / Mr K’s pocket / Sponge Bob Square Pants - Choose an interesting character, who you could use for this piece of writing. Writing task: To think of 12 things that are either in Mr S’s or Mr K’s pocket or Sponge Bob Square Pants Focus: Punctuation and Sentences. Punctuation Success: OK: All sentences have capital letters and fullstops. Example: In Sponge Bob’s pockets there was a key. There was also a rubber. Good: There are a range of other punctuation eg commas, marks etc Example In Sponge Bob’s pocket there was a telescope. Why? This is so he could see where he is going. Excellent: I can use semicolons in a list. See example below Example - 12 things in Sponge Bob Square Pants Pocket. In Sponge Bob’s pocket you would find: Six crusty old crabby patties, in case he gets lost under the sea; an invite to Patrick Star’s 28th birthday party in case he forgets the address; in ant man's birthday. he Was planning to do the big jump .and he went down. Flying of course! And it was really cool for him he was absolutely super freezing because his body went in the water and flew up so high that he was so cold. But here comes the battle so here he comes he reaches some tiny potion and it makes him tiny too and he gets his pocket knife and gets everybody. And the night came it dark out. And he went in the big building and he saw two people and he slashed him out of the building and he was happy so he celebrated.

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